wow
that was beautifully done. my favorite part was when he got knocked down by the bar door. i had to go over an pick my ass up, because I laughed it off. excellent.
wow
that was beautifully done. my favorite part was when he got knocked down by the bar door. i had to go over an pick my ass up, because I laughed it off. excellent.
well
hmmm. that was very trippy. and strange. but fun. in a weird sort of way. yeah. trippy strange fun weirdness.
Not bad
Hey that was pretty good. Good buildup, but you may need to develop your story a little more. Next time make it longer. Good start.
I'll keep all that in mind.Thanks for your review. :)
Pretty good...
That was good, liked the music at the beginning where Mario was dancing. Ended too abruptly tho. Can we get a continuation?
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hi Cereal
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